Tuesday, July 23, 2013

Found You..

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That one person, who you always find everywhere in everything somehow. You don't need to remember, you just know it.."Wish you were here.."


found my lover in everything

Amidst the unknown, in the new rains
With young clear drops falling on a smile
With wet colours on unfinished palette
In the creation that my fate, with my hands was designing
I found you; I sketched you

In the most soothing music, in my favourite line
For that melody in the tune that I hear on loop
In logic for all the facts and lies
that were told to me since I was a child
I found you; I heard you

I wove many stories in my mind
in my dreams day and night
with colourful sands of time
with shadows from past and neigh
There I found you; I created you

As I set my fingers on lows and highs
on white and black keys on piano of my life
With strings of lucidity and blurredness
As I gave my heart beats to the rhythm
I found you; I sang you

With yellow rays of hope and freshness,
with words of wisdom and foolishness
on the riverbed of mornings and evenings
on flowing pebbles and flowers
I found you, I drew your reflection

At a distance, as you flinched, in bright daylight
I cheated that moment and came close to you
I stole the light around to confine you to my sight
As the weight of the moment grew
to a place away, with you I flew
Where then I found you, I unravelled you

“As the dry air gets the scent of wet soil
I know it’s raining somewhere
Yet within me something as caught flare
Somewhere the sleepiness has awaken
to only lose consciousness again in your arms..”

A beautiful scenery was then conjured
But the morning has returned now
As I wear the faded fabric of that evening
I find you, I sense you
In old and new, I somehow always find you..





"Wish you were here.."..If you haven't listened to this song, you are missing out on one of the most beautiful songs that have ever been..
  


39 comments:

  1. I just Can't express in words how beautifully you have written the lines.. I am so happy reading this.. :-)
    And the Song yes It is really a very very soothing nice song...

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    1. Hi..It feels great that you liked the lines :):)
      Such comments help me motivate myself to keep writing..!!
      and yes, I'm so glad that you have heard this song..good music needs to be shared with everyone..!
      Keep visiting the blog for more :)

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  2. Nice Poem Sakshi. I thought I was visiting a SEO or blogging site and was pleasantly surprised :)

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    1. Hi Vijay,Thank You :)
      I'm glad you were not disappointed upon landing my blog!
      Keep reading here :)

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  3. Awesome lines, closing with Pink Floyd's Track ......
    A REAL PRO U R
    m glad

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    1. Thank You Gautam :)
      glad you liked the lines and the track :)

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  4. this is by far the best write up I have read throughout the day !! beautifully expressed..
    looks like you too are a Pink Floyd fan !

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    1. Hey..Thank You so much :):)
      and yes m a pink floyd fan!!
      Cheers..!!

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  5. I undertake translation into Gujarati of the reading I like. (see: http://vaishnavashok.blogspot.in/)
    May I translate Found You....

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    1. Hi, I'm glad you liked the post. But, I've few questions. I visited your site but didn't get anything as I couldn't understand the language..are you saying you would translate my writing in gujarati and post it on your site? And if yes would you retain the original author's name and provide a link to it? please let me know the answers for the same before you go ahead and translate it..
      Thanks and regards.

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    1. Hi Jiggyasa, glad you liked the poem :)
      Thank You :)

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  7. When we love someone, we find that their reflection lingers in everything that is beautiful to the eye. It is a lovely feeling indeed.

    Cheers,
    Blasphemous Aesthete

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    1. Rightly said..you got the gist of the poem!
      I'm glad you could connect with the lines :)

      Cheers!!

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  8. Hi Sakshi, really loved the way you expressed and used the words in Found you, really a great poem..

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    1. Thank You Shushant :)
      M very glad that you liked the poem..Keep reading here :)
      Cheers..!!

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  9. Those words are very poignant and straight from the heart...Beautifully penned

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    1. Yup..writing these lines made me smile.. :)
      Thank you..glad you liked it :)
      Cheers..!!

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  10. Well Written Dear.I enjoyed reading this.

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    1. Hey Janaki, thank you so much..really glad that you enjoyed the poem :)
      Cheers..!!

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  11. A heart having hundred of stitches, bruises, deep scars with some hopes can only take down this horripulating lines lyk you did.
    God Bless You.

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    1. You write as an unknown and yet you identified..!
      I always need such wishes..thank you so much :)
      God bless us all.

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  12. Very beautiful poem. You have a way with words very possess.

    Pink Floyd has always been a fav of mine :)

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    1. Thank you Ramakant..glad to see your comment here :)
      and it feels great when I come across a Pink floyd fan..Thank god good music is still identified..actually good is a severely understated adjective for it..celestial may be the right word for it..!
      Cheers..!!

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  13. what a lovely piece of writing! Artistic truly Sakshi :) well deserved tangy tuesday pick :)

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    1. Thank You Saurabh :)Really glad you liked it!
      Though you found it on 'Spicy Saturday Pick'!! Any way, thank god you commented coz I wasn't aware that the post was chosen!!
      Thank You again :)

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    1. Thank you :) M really glad that you liked it :)

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  15. Beautifully written Sakshi, keep it up! :)

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