If I had a single moment to myself each day,
That day would be filled with pain again-
For in that moment I would unquestionably find
That what I'd become is not how I'd begun.
If I had a single chance to take,
That instance would be filled with doubt again-
For in that chance I would not rely,
This what I wanted is not what I need.
If I had a single fibre of courage bestowed,
That strength would slowly waste away
And to that strength I would not hold
For tears taste better to a hopeless soul.
If I had a single hand to hold-
That gesture would be frowned upon,
For in that hand is a touch of kindness-
That guilt would be my ultimate withdrawal.
If I was asked to make a single wish,
That dream I'd seen open eyes would revive,
And in that dream I would want to reside-
For what I rush through is just life.
So don't give me a moment, a chance or courage
Don't lend me a hand or ask for my wish
I don't want to cherish what I can't nourish
I just want to rush through this life.
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"That what I'd become is not how I'd begun." This is a story of so many like us ... i loved it !!!
ReplyDeleteyea..me too..m glad she wrote it and i could share here..m sure many can relate to it..glad you liked it :)
Deleteand as always I was looking forward to your comment..glad you commented..thank you once again :)
many of us can relate to these lines, nice.
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Deletevery nice one.....
ReplyDeletevery well written
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DeleteReally well written poem... :)
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DeleteThis is an absolute stunner!
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DeleteSplendid ! Reading was a bliss.Keep posted bit frequently :)
ReplyDeleteHi..m really glad you liked it :)
DeleteI do try to post as frequently as possible but i know i don't really succeed in doing that coz unless the quality of the post doesnt seem to be good enough according to me, i don't post..but yes, i should try to post frequently..and i'll keep trying :)
Thank you and keep reading :)
OMG ! It was awesome. I read it aqain and again
ReplyDeleteHi Vishal..really glad you liked it this much :) :)
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Sorry for deleting the previous comment, but my link for blogger has changed..but anyway..love this post!
DeleteLove,
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ReplyDeleteVery well thought out n expressed-----i am so glad i read it!!!!
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DeleteM glad too that you liked it :)
Happy Reading :)
well written...
ReplyDeletexo janika
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I am glad I came across your post.. very well written indeed :D
ReplyDeleteThank You Namrota :)
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Beautiful thoughts... beautifully expressed!!
ReplyDeleteThank you Radhika :)
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Beautifully constructed poem Sakshi... many of us, including myself, can relate to the pain depicted in it. Great job!
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a wonderful work & i liked all the last lines of the stanzas coz that is common to human.Smiles:)to u & ur friend.GOD<3U
ReplyDeleteHi Adhi, thank you for loving the wrk and :) :) :)
DeleteGod bless u too..keep reading :)
Cheers..!!
Good one...but seems to be an escapism... will it solve or soothe the pain?
ReplyDeleteSreedev Soman @ KookyDom
It's not escapism, but whatever it is, it will soothe the pain..it can't solve coz the problem is that the problem is unknown!!
DeleteSimply awesome and very artistic..
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negativism is very powerful sometimes.. is this what it is all about?
ReplyDeletenegativism is indeed very powerful and overshadows positivism and so we tend to rush through things..it is about feeling disconnected, escapism, daily humdrum..
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